20 thoughts on “i am old

  1. This was poignant sweet, friend. I’ve been thinking about you since last Monday when she left. At least, I think that’s when she did… you painted such a wonderful word picture of love in this poem.

  2. Yes, this did read a little bit sad. (especially the gray hair part..lol)
    But the sorrow revealed all the wonderful happy times and that is more important.
    Put on a pot of coffee. ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. “the vacuum no longer groans with the pain of inhaling sharp objects” Very true. I never thought I’d miss this sound. Keep writing. Pain makes lovely poetry. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Be well.

  4. Alice i am well, i have had a year to be ready for her departure wich is why there are only sad tunes instead of huge sobs!there are times when i am so excited for her and proud of her i feel like i don’t miss her enough tho ๐Ÿ˜‰

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