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it doesn't have to rhyme 
Awesome poem! My favorite part was the last two lines, “with just one mirrored telescope the heavens filled my eyes.” Excellent writing, my friend! Hope you have a good day!
Cheers,
Tyler 🙂
Tyler i appreciate the feed back this is kinda “out of the box” for me so i was not sure. I am glad you liked it!
Thats very good. Deserves to be spoken aloud..
Thanks honestly i was watching star trek last night and that’s where it came from Go Figure!
As good a muse as any 😀
Ah yep! Beam me up!
Imight well go to see the latest film soon, should be good 🙂
For sure I will I love sci-fi
Then we both have good taste 😀
Greats minds……
That is so much better than the alternative 😀
What a whimsical way to describe looking at heavens through a telescope. Wonderful.
Thanks Susan that’s exactly what I was going for!
I have been floating around in la la land for a few weeks. Trying to feel better and get my bearings. The stars are a good guide. Looking at our beautiful world always makes one happy and in awe. 🙂
That is very sweet,you’ve been sick?
Yes I have. lol Even got sick of blogging. 😦 Well, not really. Just had little interest in it and no concentration. Trying to jump back in. You may know me better as http://ladysighs.wordpress.com/
I finished the April Poetry Month by just logging in and posting. I really appreciated your following along and liking!!! I just felt so bad that I couldn’t come around and enjoy what everyone else made. Right now I haven’t a new rhyme in my brain. And Yes, I know it doesn’t have to rhyme……..as you kindly remind us. lol I need to branch out and try to write something different. But sometimes feel a sense of Falseness if I do. I want freshness……..but authenticity too. Don’t want to force.
No worries we all fizzle out at times just take it as it comes!
This was wonderful. I like the space imagery and I especially liked the last two lines. Telescopes are amazing and I’ve always been fascinated by the stars. I would love to be on a space ship at warp speed!! 🙂
Oh me too Kira I am such a sci-fi nerd
I am too…it’s ridiculous at times! But I just found out that I’ve been missing out since I’ve never read Dune!